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The serpent is the craftiest of all God's creatures.
He slumbers easily in the cavern of the heart,
the rythm of life rocking him steadily asleep.
Until the beat quickens, and his eyes are opened,
and his hunger awakens.
Teeth sink deep into the soft warm flesh,
refusing to let go, feeding on the past.
Gently constricting his prey, pressing out reality,
he lures back to the time when the feast was intense
and emotion and blood ran quick.
Numbed by the venom, the prey rushes onward
seeking the thing that once gave it life.
Until the rush ends, the serpent is satisfied,
and the feeling returns to a drained, empty soul.
The serpent is the craftiest of all God's creatures.
©2007-2009 ~Loyalyak
:iconloyalyak:

Author's Comments

... this is much darker than I actually feel right now... read it as you will. I think it can be taken a few different ways.

I didn't feel like writing for the longest time... then suddenly this came to me while writing an essay on Genesis Chapter 2... *shrug* That's life.

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:iconnightwhisper1025:
You're right on both counts: it is very dark, and can be read many ways. But it's very good.

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What're you lookin' at, punk?
:iconloyalyak:
Again, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) You just made my day!

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=christians ~livingpoetsociety

I wish I was a glow worm
A glow worms never glum
Cuz how can you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum?
:iconmurfq:
Very interesting. Very thought provoking. I'm especially struck by the middle section and its thoughts of clinging to memories of the past. Great job. Definitely many ways to take this.

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The deepest humility is the secret of the truest happiness, of a joy that nothing can destroy ~ Andrew Murray

Just because you encounter an obstacle, doesn't mean you should change directions.
~MurfQ-Stock

~pro-life
:iconloyalyak:
Thank you very much for your kind words. I really needed some cheering up tonight and you put a smile on my face. Thank you. God bless.

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=christians ~livingpoetsociety

I wish I was a glow worm
A glow worms never glum
Cuz how can you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum?
:iconmurfq:
Well in that case, I'm very glad that I finally got around to taking the time to go through my message centre. God bless you! :hug:

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The deepest humility is the secret of the truest happiness, of a joy that nothing can destroy ~ Andrew Murray

Just because you encounter an obstacle, doesn't mean you should change directions.
~MurfQ-Stock

~pro-life
:iconpandalemur:
This is wonderfully written, even if it's darker than you meant.

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I'm pro-life. That includes post-womb.
400,000 deaths. Stop the genocide. Be aware.
{www.savedarfur.org}

"It is paramount for me to know that I am an artist and a Christian. They are inseperable from me." - Krystyna Sanderson

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