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Don't shine the spring-time sun on me.
Don't spark that light inside.
Don't spread your wings to set me free,
Just let me sit and hide.

Don't flutter in my stomach.
Don't race within my veins.
Don't warm my cheeks
and give me peace
that I know just can't stay.

Go capture someone strong enough
to thrive within your grasp.
Let loose your grip upon my heart,
release your iron clasp.

Don't give me hope.
Don't give me joy.
Don't waft into my dreams,
where all defenses fall as prey
to your enticing schemes.

Don't linger here.
Keep moving on.
Walk right by my door.

Dont' stay here any longer.
You're not welcome anymore.

Don't stay.

           ... don't stay.

                                                     don't go.
©2004-2009 ~Loyalyak
:iconloyalyak:

Author's Comments

I wrote this one over a year ago after a particularily painful breakup... most people write love letters, but I decided to write a letter to love itself.

I like this one, despite the memories attached to it, so I decided to make it my FEATURED DEVIATION for the month of October... well, what's left of October.

Enjoy!

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:iconchadwood:
awww - very raw and emotional. I really like it :-D

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:iconloyalyak:
:D Thank you. It's one of my faves.

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I wish I was a glow worm
A glow worms never glum
Cuz how can you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum?
:iconhushedthoughts:
that was one of the best ones i've had the pleasure of reading!!!! :winner:

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I guess I like you enough to say something :shrug:

I'm a member are you??? ~NejiHina
:iconloyalyak:
Wow... thank you so much! I'm honored by your kind words.

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I wish I was a glow worm
A glow worms never glum
Cuz how can you be grumpy
When the sun shines out your bum?
:iconhushedthoughts:
it was great what else could i say

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I guess I like you enough to say something :shrug:

I'm a member are you??? ~NejiHina
:iconkbx3:
Wow this is beautiful. You've got insane talent girl!

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"Out of the ashes of destruction comes the need to create."

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